ACC 3 : GUESS WHAT?
Long time ago, Mexico
suburban there life 5 people teenage boys. Five people named Jose teenager, Chris,
Emanuel, Montin, and Carlos. They were friends since they were toddlers. So no
wonder if they've considered themselves as blood brothers.
Once Jose, Chris, Emanuel,
Montin, and Carlos went kesebuah beach holiday together in Mexico. They are
very antusia once with vacation time, holiday time because it was a holiday to
celebrate their graduation from high school.
When I got there they went straight
to kepantai and playing with water. Menupahkan all expenses after the test.
When Jose, Chris, Emanuel, Montin, and Carlos were playing on the beach.
Suddenly the view Jose turned into a house eating grilled fish. There was a
teenage girl, so pretty.
"Hay Chris, look very pretty girl there .. I was fascinated with her? "said Jose he assign it to the girl.
"Wow, he's really pretty .. you like him?? "says Chris.
"Yes ... like, let's get there? "said Jose further.
Immediately Chris Jose and headed
home to eat it to get acquainted with the girl. Until there Jose directly
acquainted with the girl. Turns out she was named melly. Jose is excited with
melly. Melly is a pretty girl too sweet. He also nimble and resilient. That
makes Jose interested in him.
Gradually their relationship closer. Until a time to express his feelings on melly Jose. It was also melly receive Jose feelings and dating.
One night melly suddenly call Jose.
Gradually their relationship closer. Until a time to express his feelings on melly Jose. It was also melly receive Jose feelings and dating.
One night melly suddenly call Jose.
"Hello, Jose, did you sleep?"
"Hello baby, I had not slept there anything?"
"I want to talk something for you, I want to end our relationship" clearly melly
Immediately Jose surprised,
"Why? Am I wrong to you? " Jose said confused
"No, Jose. You were very kind to me. Therefore you get a girl patas better. I'm sorry Jose "
Immediately call closed by melly.
Jose immediately became very weak. She still does not believe that the girl he
loved had left her for no apparent reason.
After that day Jose became very quiet. Attitude changes experienced by Jose. He became very close to some of the girls themselves. Chris, Emanuel, Montin, and Carlos who saw his friend being like it was very sad.
After that day Jose became very quiet. Attitude changes experienced by Jose. He became very close to some of the girls themselves. Chris, Emanuel, Montin, and Carlos who saw his friend being like it was very sad.
"Never mind Jose, Should you move on with my life. Do not like this "Emanuel said encouragingly.
"This is probably the tebaik for you." Continue Calos
"I tried to remove it, but I'm Paralyzed But, And believe me when I say. If I could live without her, I would just walk away. But I feel sick when I'm not around her. Like I'm allergic to the pain. If I could breathe without melly, I would let go of her hand. But every time I try, I feel like half a man. So it's obvious I cant. Its obvious I cant” Jose clear to his friends.
"I'm very sad to see you like this. Do not like it? "Chris said sadly.
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Hehehe I guess the song that math with your story is from Menudo - Obvious, Right? and please increase your vocabulary. okey thanks
ahahaha, yes that's Obvious from Menudo :D
I think you have mistake in :
>> "Menupahkan all expenses" (Paragraph 3)
>> "This is probably the tebaik for you." (what is "tebaik" ?? ) ahaha XD
Thank you
Rima,,, I think the song is Obvious from Menudo
I like listening this song :D
You should be careful while using tenses :)
nice story rima, keep it up :)
hahaa :D I really know that song..you knew it from me, isn't it? hehee
It's OBVIOUS - Menudo .. that's great song.. your text is nice too.. actually I want to give comments, but your blog runs slowly --
"Therefore you get a girl patas better."
What das the meaning PATAS ??
Hemmm.. Rim, you must be careful in the use of said? a lot of words you do not mean to english... he he he
oh no...
This is very easy for me to answer, hmm..
because I really know about this song and I love it.. :D
the title is OBVIOUS the singer is Menudo.. :P
the key is "I would just walk away", " I would let go of her hand. But every time I try, I feel like half a man. So it's obvious I cant. Its obvious I cant"
^_-
Aha... this is Obvious by Menudo.
Your story is good
but you should be more thorough again. :)
"So it's obvious I cant. Its obvious I cant" --> OBVIOUS
notice your translate again girl ! Fighting !! :D
wow ... I get a lot of criticism .. heheh :)
sorry, I do a lot of mistakes, still learning .. heheh: D
anyway, thank you much everything .. to suggestions and criticism.
okay, I'll be more careful and increase vocabulary ...
thanks all for your comment
Rima, there are some word that still in Indonesian word, for example : "kesebuah", "kepantai". So, you have check again. Fighting !!! :)
I don't know the song, hehe :3
But, it's a great story. A sad story .___.
Anyway, i was little confused with the 2nd paragraph :3
oke, reni ambar, thank for your kritik me...
i'm sorry, thank you
#fighting :D
It is love story right? I wanna guess but actually my guess is same with others. It likes a real experiences, but there are some indonesian words. I guess you have used google translate to do this, but i hope it was not. I am very appreciate with your story because you made it by yourself but maybe you have to try not to use google translate (if my guess is true)...
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